Essay Instructions: I ordered a paper on Globalization?s Effect on the United States? National Security that was due on May 20, 2012 (Order #A2064566). Because of a busy schedule and confidence in this website from previous orders, I neglected to read the paper until today. Unfortunately, it is too late to request a rewrite. This is the reason for this order. The paper I received vaguely discussed the requests made in the original request. It did not expand on any issue. After reading it, I still don?t really understand how Globalization is affecting National Security. For example, it did not expand on the education system in the United States (e.g. whether its lagging behind in important subjects such as Math and Science) and its effect on National Security (e.g. on innovation). It didn?t discuss how it contributed, exactly, to the 9/11 attacks. In addition, it makes references to numbers and statistics without proper reference and does not explain the included charts and graphs. The last chart is hard to understand because it is misaligned. It often repeats itself. It also has numerous grammatical errors and is not written in proper English. I made a substantial initial investment in this project, but did not receive a quality product at the Master?s level. Because of my neglect, I am willing to make another financial commitment to this paper. I have paid for 5 additional pages. This should suffice for another writer to review the paper I received from this service and perfect it. This will require some deletion of content (especially repetitive items) and an addition of content (expansion of Education, Innovation, and any other globalization issue). Please ensure to properly cite resources, especially numbers and statistics. If any of the graphs or charts are used, please fix them to be readable. Please correct the grammatical errors and write in proper English. Basically, I am looking for a rewrite of the originally provided poor paper. I also paid for a summary page. If possible, please provide a summary. This can be bullet points of the important items of the paper. After completion, I should be able to see how globalization has affected the US? National Security. Please use Chicago Style citations. In addition, please update the bibliography. Take out the items you decided not to use and add any you decide to use. I appreciate your help with this matter. The paper should still be 17 pages. I absolutely require it by early Friday, June 1, 2012. I will attach the received paper as a source material. Again, THANK YOU!!! Below is the original request made:
This paper is to explore Globalization's Effect on the United States' National Security. Please ensure to discuss topics such as the economy's role in National Security and the importance of education. Emphasize the fact that the last National Security Strategy by current President Obama (May 2010) is the first time these items are addressed in and National Security Strategy. This should be one of the sources. Within the document it states things like, "We must grow our economy and reduce our deficit. We must educate our children to compete in an age where knowledge is capital, and the marketplace is global. We must develop clean energy that can power new industry, unbind us from foreign oil, and preserve our planet. We must pursue science and research that enables discovery, and unlocks wonders as unforeseen to us today as the surface of the moon and the microchip were a century ago. Simply put, we must see American innovation as a foundation of American power." It also has some other interesting items such as, "The United States must ensure that we have the world's best-educated workforce, a private sector that fosters innovation, and citizens and businesses that can access affordable health care to compete in a globalized economy." There are other mentions of globalization and the importance of the US to be able to compete. I also have read that globalization is one key reason 9/11 was able to be successful. Things such as a good economy help the US fund its defense as well. There are many avenues to explore with this topic. Please include some charts and graphs (maybe to compare the US to other countries - e.g. education levels, economy growth and decline, ect...). I mention 10 sources are required, but more or less can be used; however, the sources MUST BE peer-reviewed sources. You may use a couple of media sources, but not for facts. Please include the major sections as if it were a small thesis (Intro, Literature Review, Analysis, Interpretations and Findings, Conclusion, etc...). It must be at a minimum of 17 pages (not including the bibliography). I am providing additional time because quality is the upmost importance to me. I will also be requesting (at the additional fee) an executive summary of the paper as well. I appreciate your hard work on this important project. Please write the paper in Chicago Style. Also cite all sources using Chicago Style rules.
