Essay Instructions: Subject name: Rediscovering Asian history, Culture And Tradition
Faculty: History
2450-2550 words
Essay Topic:
Consider how national identity and culture is constructed through fashion in China and Japan.
This is an in depth research essay requiring you to make a comparative (case study) analysis of constructions of Nationalism and Culture in China and Japan.
Important Points to Consider in Examining constructed nationalism and culture. (you must demonstrate your understanding our following points in your essay)
1. What is the traditional or other basis for these constructions or practices?
2. Why did these constructed ideologies emerge, or become subject to reinvention, when they did? Here you need to make sure you provide very concise historical and political context to support your analysis (your reader is your marker, don?t tell story).
3. What purposes do these constructions serve?
4. Whose interests are served in these constructions (eg. elite groups, populist or dissident groups)
5. What are the implications of these constructions?
6. What similarities and/or differences can you observe from your case study of these two Asian societies?
This essay should conform to general academic standards of presentation?spelling, syntax, paragraphs, introduction, main body, conclusion, and references. The title as set should appear on the first page, all pages numbered, and importantly your essay should be properly referenced throughout and must include a full list of references. Ideally your essay should be typed/word-processed (1.5 or double-spaced lines). Remember to answer the question as set; don't simply off load everything you may happen to know about the topic in hand! Obviously in answering your essay title you should seek to draw on subject themes, studies, theories, concepts and debates where relevant as well as possible other sources when useful to do so.
This essay will be assessed in these aspects: Composition, written expression, technical presentation.
Analytical skills?your ability to explicate a given issue or set of issues;in other words, to your ability to write about these issues in a way which sheds light on them, and which demonstrates your grasp of them.
Composition---the way in which your argument has been structured, or in other words to the form of the essay ( good introduction-, topic sentence for each paragraph, one paragraph one idea, good transition, good strong conclusion- It is strictly assessed for this essay?)
Written Expression---your prose style. The major weaknesses in this category are usually to do with syntax (sentence structure) and vocabulary.
Technical presentation?the overall formatting of the essay, and especially to the presentation of footnotes and bibliography. (please use Chicago Manual of Style)
Requirements
*This is a comparative essay, you should balance your words on both countries and your job is not to describe but analyze and make your arguments and all these should serve to make your thesis persuasive.
*The examples you choose from both of the countries must have illurstrative and representative (or symbolic)value for analysizing their construction of national identity and culture,and also worth comparing their similaritied and differences.
*This is a history course, do not compare their contemporary fashion.
*use the past tense, for both events and discussions of other authors work.
*Take an authoritative tone but not an arrogant one.
*You need a good introduction. It should be brief but include the following: Question, Stance, Argument and Approach. Be explicit about these things.
*all paragraphs should have a strong and clear topic sentence.
*Make the structure of your essay a conscious choice, not an accident. Think about taking your reader through your ideas, by the hand.
*Cut all the padding out of your essay and your sentences.
*Each sentence should only be about one idea and each paragraph should be made up of a set of sentences about one idea.
*Avoid starting sentences with the following words: However, Thus, For example.
* This essay requires you to paraphrase and summarize others? ideas or arguments and concentrate on strong analysis. We are interested in your idea. Not direct quote in this essay. If you really want to use direct quote, you can only use a few short sentences and phrases.
*don?t use a lot of words to explain a concept, such as nationalism and culture, your reader is your marker, be concise about those things, you should concentrate on your argument and analysis. You will fail if your own argument and analysis is not sufficient.
* YOU MUST USE BOOKS AND ACADEMIC JOURNALS BESIDES GOOD INTERNET RESOUECES, because they are more authoritative and academic. Use real authoritative sourses(17 sources at least)
*use active voice whereas possible.
*use Chicago Manual of Style for footnote and bibliography of this essay
*Outline your essay
The purpose of an outline is to help you think through your topic carefully and organize it logically before you start writing. A good outline is the most important step in writing a good paper. Check your outline to make sure that the points covered flow logically from one to the other. Include in your outline an INTRODUCTION, a BODY, and a CONCLUSION. Make the first outline tentative.
INTRODUCTION - State your thesis and the purpose of your research paper clearly. What is the chief reason you are writing the paper? State also how you plan to approach your topic. Is this a factual report, a book review, a comparison, or an analysis of a problem? Explain briefly the major points you plan to cover in your paper and why readers should be interested in your topic. (you should include: Question, Stance, Argument and Approach. Be explicit about these things.)
BODY - Each paragraph in the body of the essay should include a topic sentence that tells the reader the main idea of the paragraph. Other sentences in the paragraph should support this with examples. In your paragraphs you will need to summarise and paraphrase (i.e. use your own words for) the ideas, research and arguments of others. You should use direct quotes very sparingly. Using The Ideas Finally the concluding sentence should tie the paragraph together and lead to the next paragraph. Of course, the order of the ideas covered in the paragraphs will follow the plan.
CONCLUSION - This should summarise the main view (thesis) presented. Explain why you have come to this particular conclusion. It should briefly review the ideas covered and finish off with an overall comment on the topic, e.g. future developments, recommendations.
CHECKLIST ONE:
1. Is my thesis statement concise and clear?
2. Did I follow my outline? Did I miss anything?
3. Are my arguments presented in a logical sequence?
4. Are all sources properly cited to ensure that I am not plagiarizing?
5. Have I proved my thesis with strong supporting arguments?
6. Have I made my intentions and points clear in the essay?
CHECKLIST TWO:
1. Did I begin each paragraph with a proper topic sentence?
2. Have I supported my arguments with documented proof or examples?
3. Any run-on or unfinished sentences?
4. Any unnecessary or repetitious words?
5. Varying lengths of sentences?
6. Does one paragraph or idea flow smoothly into the next?
7. Any spelling or grammatical errors?
8. Quotes accurate in source, spelling, and punctuation?
10. Did I avoid using contractions? Use "cannot" instead of "can't", "do not" instead of "don't"?
11. Did I use third person as much as possible? Avoid using phrases such as "I think", "I guess", "I suppose"
12. Have I made my points clear and interesting but remained objective?
13. Did I leave a sense of completion for my reader(s) at the end of the paper?