following sentences are discourteous, boastful, humble, vague. rewrite to make to sound or look more business
tone), and correct those mistakes
-Something is obviously wrong in your head office. They have once more sent me the wrong model number. Can they ever get things straight?
-My instructor wants me to do a term paper on safety regulations at a small plant. Since you are the manager of a small plant, send me all the information I need at once. My grade depends heavily on all this.
-It is apparent that you are in business
to rip off the public.
-I was wondering if you could possibly see your way into sending me the local chapter president’s name and address??"if you have the time, that is.
-I have waited for my confirmation for two weeks now. Do you expect me to wait forever, or can I get some action?
-It goes without saying that we cannot honor your request.
-May I take just a moment of your valuable time to point out that our house for the next three weeks will change, and we trust and pray that no one in your agency will be terribly inconvenienced by this.
-Your application has been received and will be kept on the file for six months. If we are interested in you, we will notify you. If you do not hear from us, please do not write
-My past performance as a medical technologist has left nothing to be desired.
-Credit means a lot to some people. But obviously you do not care about yours. If you did, you would have sent us the $249.95 you rightfully owe us three months ago. What's wrong with you?
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