Wrong Sentence 7

May I take just a moment of your valuable time to point out that our house for the next three weeks will change, and we trust and pray that no one in your agency will be terribly inconvenienced by this.

Correct Sentence 7

This is just to notify you that we shall be changing our house for the coming three weeks. We greatly regret any inconveniences caused. Thank you.

Wrong Sentence 8

Your application has been received and will be kept on the file for six months. If we are interested in you, we will notify you. If you do not hear from us, please do not write us again.

Correct Sentence 8

This is just to notify you that your application was successfully received. If you do not hear from us within the next few days, please consider your application unsuccessful. Your application will, however, be...
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