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Essay Instructions: My name is Myriam Destin and I would like to order a research paper. I will fax and e-mail the complete course syllabus. The topic of this paper is: Do graduates of off-shore medical schools attain fewer, more or different specialty certifications.
Please include a complete bibliography. Works cited can also be included if necessary. I can be reached at .
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Essay Instructions: Name: Olawale Bello
Medical School Application Personal Statement
This is whatever I can think of about myself. I am from Mexico, came from farming community, the family migrate here to the state 4 years ago, parents have little education
completed highschool at chicago, was very intersted in computer science at highschool, after high school enroll to community college, spent the first 2 year of college studying computer science
end up working for a hospital as patient database administrator and slowly become interested in medicine. A friend at the hospital Dr. Monzela and Dr. McNeal allow to shadow to explore the medical profession, grown interest during Summer before enroll in the 3rd year at UIC.
When enroll into UIC (University of Illinois at Chicago) decide to switch to biology degree and start persueing to become a doctor. With low biology background (only took 2 sem. during the first 2 year and did not do too well in those) so have to play catchup. however as time
go on gpa improve and interest in the medical profession grown more and more everyday. Interested in the medical profession because during the time following the 2 physician friend, I see that many people are very unaware about what they are doing to themself therefore wanting
to become doctor not only to treat but also educate people, have great interest in nutrition and kinetic. Because of low background in biology therefore spent most of the time studying for class
therefore do not have any type of leadership intern however whatever free time I have is spent on working with http://www.livesmart.org to educate people on nutrition, lifestyle ect... Contact information can be found on website. Job on: http://www.livesmart.org is to research articles on nutrition and design the site with that information to help educate people. Whatever free time I have is devoted to the website, excercise at the gym, and reading on nutrition.
I'm sorry but that's all I can think of, I am very stress out so that's the best i can do. I hope that is enought information for you to make a personal statement essay out of it.

Essay Instructions: I wrote a personal statement as a part of my medical school application and I need some sort of proofreading/editing/spelling check/
grammer/more professional insight.
There are a few medical school applications... one of the instructions state: Type a personal statement
explaning: (A) your purpose for considering a career in medicine: (B) why you would be an asset to (name of medical school)
(C) significant activities or acplishments, personal interests, unique aspects of your premedical preparation and any
additional information that would help the Admissions Committee in the evaluationn of your application.

A little about myself:
experiences in hospitals and clinica:
1) Atlantic Medical Center, Chicago IL (administrative, blood test, blood pressure, EKG, height, weight, temp., etc.)
2) Gottlieb Memorial Hospital (ER), Melrose Park, IL (assisting physicians w/ transporting patients, stock supplies, etc.)
3) Doctors office, Aurora, IL (blood pressure, height, weight, temp., etc.)


I am not sure what the formal format is on a personal statement.
I am enclosing my personal statement. Further questions please contact me
work: ext. 125
e-mail:
Thank you.

Essay Instructions: "In 300 words or less, state why you want to become a physician and what you can bring to the world of medical health in today's multicultural society" - This is the question stem

I was hoping to still use the Jonier story because I think it was great and ver personable. I trimmed it down a bit to get it to their desired max of 300 words, although I stopped at a certain point because I felt it was starting to really take a way the heart of the essay. I would still like to use the Jonier story, but if you feel as if you need to go in a different direction I understand.

They said 310 would be the absolute maximum.

This is what I trimmed it down to......
I looked at this young boy?slouching, defiant, tense and trying his best to ignore me?and I saw myself, 15 years ago. I too was a stubborn adolescent, who had difficulty assimilating to the struggles inherent to first-generation English speakers. Looking back at the resolution in the young man?s face who I was supposed to be tutoring, all of my own resolve solidified and I renewed my commitment to help him?despite his best efforts to the contrary.
Jonier was the young boy I had the pleasure of working with for two years during my tenure at Big Brothers and Big Sisters of America. Like me, he suffered from the fact that English was not his native language, and was labeled one of the worst adolescents in the program. I realized that his language barrier was largely the cause for all of his behavioral, social and scholastic issues, and realized that it would take someone with a firm commitment to helping others to keep him from becoming another casualty of poor socio-economic conditions?I resolved to become that person.
My two years with Jonier helped me realize my purpose in life?assisting others and giving them a chance to overcome unfortunate life circumstances. As I spent time with him each week, taking him out to eat and working through his school assignments, I found my passion for helping others. I believe that the principle way I can continue to do so is by laboring through medical school, becoming a doctor, and gaining the requisite knowledge to hone my talents to become a successful practitioner in the medical field.
In the final weeks of my time working with Jonier, I was able to see a tangible difference in his interactions with others and his zest for life in general. He now had a better understanding that hard work and focus could help him overcome his circumstances, much as it enabled me to overcome similar circumstances. I truly believe that my acceptance into Ross University School of Medicine will enable me to gain the necessary skills and talents required to continue impacting the lives of others, by not only providing them with proper medical care but also a proper perspective on life?s vicissitudes and the way to triumph throughout them.