Essay Instructions: This P.S. is for transferring UC and it has 3 questions.
Question #1 (200-230 words)
what's your major? Discuss how your interest in the field developed and describe any experience you have had in the field and the employment, student organization and activties and what you have gained from your involvement.
This question seeks to understand a student's motivation and dedication to learning.
i have strong motivation for learning in two areas: architecture and economy. my father is a great architect and the house that i lived in China was designed by him. i always remember that he teaches me how to make a house model with sand by the sea beach. i would like to follow his step and also i have great interest in designing buildings. For economy,i have great interest too. i am a member of DECA(an association of marketing students), i meet a lot of good pros and i learned a lot(interest gain). i practice buying stock and experience the relationship between the market and the stock price. i have worked as a teller for Omni Bank.
P.S. Architure is my firt choice major and it is more important than Economy.
Question #2(200-230 words)
Tell us a talent, experience, contribution or personal quality you will bring to the University of California.
as a member of Phi Theta kappa, the largest honor society of 2 year colleges, i got a great opportunity to know more, not just about western culture, but other societies and cultures in the US as well.
as a secondary of Asian Student Association, it has given me the chance to develop my leadership skills besides serving the community, which has given me a lot , and i am very grateful for it. By serving the homeless people, building houses with Salvation Army, Cleaning the beaches and canyons, walking for AIDS created fund-raisers, collecting books for the needy children and Getting Fund for the casualty of the hurricane, i can say i that i am payng back to the community that has given to me a great opportunity for freedom and reaching my professional goals, that arise from the desire to serve others to the best of my talents.
Question #3(600-650)
Is there anything you would ike us to know about you or your academic record that you have not had the opptunity to describle elsewhere in this application!
immigrated to US 4 years ago(2001) with my mother and lived with my step-father, entered American High School as a junior.
graduated from high school with a 3.3 GPA(2003). i started working full time in a factory on the night shift(7pm-4am) and at the same time i have to go to school at Ohlone college(Fall semester 11 units taking, spring 12 units taking). During that time, my step father and my mother were having war everyday, and the college life seemed so weird,i was shocked. my step father was so mean to me, he asked me and my mom to go to work and earn money but he doesnot do anything other than staying home and drinking beers. he opposed me to go to college. "Why you go to college, go to work and get some more shifts, stop wasting your time and money" he said this crap to me very often. first semester i ended up with 4 Ws and second semester even worse couple Fs. i can not live this any more and i want to change i told myself. i borrowed $2000 from my mother and i left Bay Area(Northern California). i moved to L.A. area with the 2000 dollars in the summer of 2004 and started my new life.i rent a room and find a server job.(hard but kinda easy to get money), and feed myself. i started go to Mt. San Antonio College in the fall sememster. i can barely live with money from Financial Aid.
i work part time as a server and taking 16 units and 4 out of the 5 classes i got A. spring semester of 2005 i took 23 units and i worked as a bank teller. most of those classes are A. 2005 summer, i reached the max number of classes that can be taken at Mt. San Antonio College, so i went to East LA college to take a class. i took an average of 20 units each semester and remains a 3.8 GPA.people ask me why that i took so many classes, it is because i wasted one year already,and i want to make it up. afte i moved to L.A.,i never go to a bar or club.i was busy doing my homework and working on my 21 birthday.
for this main part, please write it soulful, and show a great change of me before and after i leave my family(academic grades), how i support myself(cook,work) , No party life, just studying and working, no money for everthing,i only went to see a movie once after i moved to LA.