Three Pieces of Job Communication Essay

Peak, Inc.

Is the resume limited to one page and does it include required sections (education, employment, skills/summary of qualifications section)?

No, it is a little longer than one page, but it does have all the requisite sections.

Is everything on the resume in the correct tense (past for past jobs, present for present jobs) and in parallel phrasing using action verbs?

Yes, the tense is correct and it contains parallel phrasing that uses action verbs.

Is the cover letter limited to one page and written to the specific job applied for (highlighting experience and why this person wants to work for that company/organization)?

Yes, the cover letter is one page long, but it could be more specific to the job opening.

Is the cover letter formatted as a business letter? (e.g. single spaced with only one space between paragraphs, no indentions for paragraphs, etc.)

Yes, the cover letter is formatted as a business letter.

Does the reference sheet include the writer's contact information and complete contact information for each reference (e.g. name, company name, company address, phone number, email).The reference sheet is appropriately formatted, but digits are missing in two of the phone numbers, although this is probably on purpose for the exercise.

6. Do you see any grammatical or spelling errors? Point them out.

Cover letter: Paragraph 1, line 2 -- Should read "I have acquired…"; Paragraph 2, line 2 -- After "such as" - a colon should be used, not a semicolon; Paragraph 3, lines 2 and 5 -- Should read "included" not "include.

7. How is the organization in the documents?

The documents are well organized.

8. How does the formatting look in the documents -- is the spacing and formatting consistent and easy to read?

Yes, the formatting and spacing are consistent and make the document easy to read.

9. Overall, what is this person doing well in their draft?

The draft is fundamentally well written.

10. Overall, what does this person need to work on? Why?

The person needs to do better proofreading, and the cover….....