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Always great within a social context, Anna was a breath of fresh air in the classroom, for both me and her fellow students. Never one to ignore discussions, Anna continually stood out in classroom conversations -- without putting her classmates down to do so. She truly exhibits a passion for learning and her craft.

This energy and charisma is also illustrated in her writing. As a true devotee to her craft, Anna has never been one to be afraid of taking calculated risks with writing, within both a creative and academic context. Never once was I afraid to read her work in fear of bland and passion-less rambling, which proves typical of many undergraduates within their first few years. Rather, she proved exactly the opposite, and always took the hard route, with all its successes and lessons along the way. Courageous in both her technique and organization, she proved to have a thorough understanding of her audience as well as the rules of formal and informal writing structure. Yet, as ambitious as she is, never once was constructive criticism lost to an unbelieving mind. She was the first to listen earnestly regarding how her writing could improve, and was also the first peer her fellow students would turn to for honest and reliable advice on their own writing.
Anna worked wonders with helping her classmates edit their work and prepare themselves to elevate their writing to a level which would take them all far in their chosen academic and career paths. I strongly believe that her abilities will only continue to improve and drive her forward in whatever path she chooses for herself.

As an educator, I must admit my jealousy in not being able to lead Anna into her Graduate career. However, I know that she will prove an asset to any institution she steps foot into, and so implore this Admissions Committee to strongly consider Anna Willington for the Masters program at the University of California at San Diego. She has come a long way, and yet has so far to go. I believe such an illustrious university as the University of California at San Diego could only benefit from her presence.

Please consider my words, not only as a recommendation -- but also as a promise.

Thank you….....

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